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掌握写长句技巧为你雅思作文加分

2016-10-09

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小编:Cian 148
摘要:

  在雅思大小作文中如果你写下了几个漂亮的长句,会为你的写作加分不少。那么该如何适当合理的应用长句呢?

  首先大家可以先简单句,一般主谓结构的大家都还是比较擅长的。

  比如:The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased.

  然后添加数词

  The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased from 5 million to 15 million.

  接下来可以添加一些状语,比如时间和原因之类的:

  The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased from 5 million to 15 million between 1985 and 1995.

  确定数字的准确性,如:

  The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995.

  建议小伙伴添加一个副词

  The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased dramatically from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995.

  还可以以名词结构复述

  The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased dramatically from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995, a rise of about 10 million in 10 years.

  最终改写成:

  There was a dramatic increase in the number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995, a rise of about 10 million in 10 years.

  这样的长句你会写了么,再长可就有些繁琐了哦,所以大家谨记想要写长句就从简单句开始,在加上数字、时间等内容,轻松搞定完美长句。

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