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2015年10月10日雅思大作文考官范文

2015-10-19

来源:环球教育

小编:环球教育 91
摘要:以下是环球教育(原环球教育)为大家带来的“2015年10月10日雅思大作文考官范文”,希望对大家有所帮助!

Some people think to prevent illness and disease, government should focus more on environmental pollution and housing.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Introduction

There is no doubt that environmental pollution and terrible housing conditions contribute to poor health and lead to greater instances of sickness. Nevertheless, government has an essential role to play in the eradication of disease and ought to focus on improving the lives of their citizens.

Body

With regards to keeping the atmosphere clean, officials ought to decrease the number of vehicles on the roads to reduce environmental pollution caused by the discharge of contaminants. In terms of an industrial setting, authorities must place reasonable restrictions on factory output in order to cleanse the air and decrease atmospheric contamination. In the event that corporations fail to adhere to these established regulations, they should be heavily penalized to discourage this behaviour.

Housing plays a significant role in the well-being of citizens as they spend most of their time in their living spaces. The addition of simple facilities could increase the quality of housing including air conditioners and heaters to regulate temperature to prevent catching a cold or sinks and showers to wash away dirt. The materials used in the construction process may cause asbestos poisoning or deteriorating conditions are associated with exposure to lead, mold, dust mites and rodents. Furthermore, the prices of accommodation, especially in large cities is extraordinarily costly, forcing employees to work overtime and extra hours in order to afford housing.

Conclusion

Placing an emphasis on fixing these environmental and housing issues will have a positive effect on members of society. It will lead to preventing the spread of disease and slowly develop a higher standard of living for citizens, which ought to be the goal of any government entity.

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