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小编:长安 221相比于雅思大作文,小作文不受广大“烤鸭”们的重视。对于学霸们,小作文的难度确实要远远低于大作文。但是对于广大的学酥学弱们,这两种作文并没有本质区别,都是两个字——不会!接下来,天津环球教育林圣婴老师会通过这个小专题详细讲解下那些鲜为人知的小作文技法、套路、规律,来帮助大家短时间突破小作文的障碍。
咱们以最近一道剑13Test2的题目为例:
The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
当老师在课上让同学描述1918年的租房数据时,大多数人是这样写的:households in rented accommodation was 78%. 基本是图上的信息的复制粘贴,简直不要太舒服!如果在考场上的作文大量充斥这样的句子,等待你的也只能是考官的白眼和万年低分了。
所以,为了帮助大家更顺利的写出小作文,给大家介绍第一个四两拨千斤的小作文技巧:读取数据。
"最基本的一种描述方法就是开门见山说数据:
78% of households lived in rented accommodation in 1918.
"它的简单变形就是把数字放到句尾,这样句子就变成了:
The proportion of households in rented accommodation was 78% in 1918.
"还可以用there be句型改写:
There was 78% of households in rented accommodation in 1918.
"也可以用account for改写:
Households in rented accommodation accounted for 78% of all British families in 1918.
"如果用时间做主语就形成了拟人句:
The year 1918 saw 78% of households living in rented accommodation.
竟然能有这么多种方式表达"在1918,78%的英国家庭住在出租房里"!这种方法get了吗?咱们拿一道题目来练练手把。
剑12Test5:
The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. C12T5
请用至少两种方式写出"52.8%的15-24岁男性参加定期体育活动"
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52.8% of males aged 15-24 did regular physical activity.
In 15-24, the percentage of male exercise participants was 52.8%.
There was 52.8% of males who did regular physical activity in 15-24.
Male who did regular physical activity accounted for 52.8% of all men aged 15-24.
天津环球教育林圣婴老师
主讲科目:雅思写作
教育背景:悉尼麦考瑞大学,会计本科
教学特点:谙熟雅思写作考试要求,从全局给学生的写作备考一个整体把握。在澳洲留学5年,具备成熟的辩证思维,可以从不同维度帮助学生解读雅思考题以及安排素材。善于充分调动学生从小学习过的词汇语法,并灵活的使用在雅思写作考试中。