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托福写作中的经典语法错误

2015-07-07

来源:环球教育整理

小编:cherry 155
摘要:环球教育托福老师为烤鸭们整理了十个典型的托福写作错误,还不赶紧来看看。

      环球教育托福老师为烤鸭们整理了十个典型的托福写作错误,还不赶紧来看看。

一、名词单复数

托福作文错误重现:

原句:In the past, few student go to this university because of its badreputation of professor.

修改:In the past, few students goto this university because of its bad reputation of professors.

二、主谓一致

托福作文错误重现:

原句:My aunt worked at sales department which only have five persons.

修改:My aunt worked at sales department which only has five persons.

原句:Good education from the teachers often attract good students.

修改:Good education from the teachers often attractsgood students.

三、时态

托福作文错误重现:

原句:Her parents thought that this is my aunt’s fault, so they complainto the school.

修改:Her parents thought that this wasmy aunt’s fault, so they complained tothe school.

四、标点

托福作文错误重现:

原句:I loved every exciting movement that the sportsmen make, those kindsof movement make me very relaxed.

修改:I loved every exciting movement that the sportsmen make. Those kinds of movement make me very relaxed.

五、双谓语

托福作文错误重现:

原句:One day, I watched this program talk about the habits of lions.

修改:One day, I watched this program talkingabout the habits of lions.

六、句子残缺

托福作文错误重现:

原句:Obviously, the professor’s argument disproves its counterpart in thereading. Even though the reading passage suggests that Chevalier is very poor.

修改:Obviously, the professor’s argument disproves its counterpart in thereading, even though the reading passagesuggests that Chevalier is very poor.

原句:Despite the statement in the reading that eco-certified wood is moreexpensive than normal wood. The professor contends that American customers willcare about the price only when price difference is too big.

修改:Despite the statement in the reading that eco-certified wood is moreexpensive than normal wood, the professorcontends that American customers will care about the price only when pricedifference is too big.

七、非谓语动词

托福作文错误重现:

原句:If you choosing an unsecure job, you will always worry about thestability of your job.

修改:If you choose an unsecure job,you will always worry about the stability of your job.

原句:The reading passage contends that read fewer literature books hasbad effect for reading public, culture and the future of literature.

修改:The reading passage contends that readingfewer literature books has bad effect for reading public, culture and thefuture of literature.

原句:The professor proves that this claim is not correct by pointing out thatdestroy fossils is better than bury them in the ground.

修改:The professor proves that this claim is not correct by pointing outthat destroying fossils is better than burying them in the ground.

八、连词

托福作文错误重现:

原句:My brother had only learned concepts of the textbooks before, thus afterthe experiment, he gradually knew better about knowledge on the books.

修改:My brother had only learned concepts of the textbooks before, but after the experiment, he gradually knewbetter about knowledge on the books.

九、代词

托福作文错误重现:

原句:People really want to achieve the dreams because dream is relatedwith your future happiness.

修改:People really want to achieve the dreams because dream is relatedwith their future happiness.

讨论对象变来变去

原句:He learned a lot of knowledge from the teacher and her scoresincreased quickly.

修改:He learned a lot of knowledge from the teacher and his scores increased quickly.

十、被动

托福作文错误重现:

原句:Finally, the author of the reading claims that American woodcompanies need to certified only when they sole to foreign market.

修改:Finally, the author of the reading claims that American woodcompanies need to be certified only whenthey are sold to foreign market.

原句:Finally, the professor asserts that Chevalier was escaped byclimbing through the roof, whereas the author of the reading claims that hesaved from a prison by his friends’ bribery.

修改:Finally, the professor asserts that Chevalier escaped by climbing through the roof, whereas theauthor of the reading claims that he was savedfrom a prison by his friends’ bribery.

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